Get Your Landing Page Copy Critiqued by 3 Experts – FREE!
by Joel K

How’d you like to get feedback on your landing page copy from 3 experts?

How’d you like it if that was totally free?

Today’s your lucky day – but you gotta act fast.

On April 9th, myself, Sean Smith and Paul Jarvis  are hosting a FREE webinar as part of CRO Day where we will…

  • Share tips and tricks on improving your copy
  • Show you examples of pages done well (and poorly)
  • Share how simple changes to your copywriting process can net you way more leads and sales

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As part of the webinar (which you can register for here), we’re hoping to do a “PageFights” style critique of some REAL landing pages, where we’ll analyze the page and give feedback on everything from your headlines and calls to action to the way the information is organized.

It’s not a bash-fest – we’ll be sharing actionable tips to IMPROVE the copy that you can take to the bank.

It’s like having 3 experts give you a 5 minute landing page audit for ZERO DOLLARS.

Here’s how to get involved:

1. Leave a comment  or email joel@businesscasualcopywriting.com and tell us the URL of the page you’d like us to analyze.

2. Share any information you think we need to know about your product/service/audience to give us some context for the critique.

3. >>> Tune in to the webinar <<<on April 9th, and watch to see if we picked your page!

We’ll be recording the webinar, so even if you can’t attend, submit your page anyways.

You can also check out all of the awesome events taking place on CRO Day at this link – there’s a TON of awesome value to be had and plenty of events and webinars led by brilliant CRO minds.

 

7 Comments
  1. my audience is freelance web design and developers

  2. Hi Joel, great idea – looking forward to it!

    Here’s a landing page for you to tear apart – http://urlprofiler.com/landing/

    I was going to put it in The Pit on Inbound, but this sounds better. This is a page that we plan to send people to from our generic remarketing ads. So anyone landing on this page should already have SOME context about what our product is/does as they have been on our site before.

    However, we also plan to use a lot of the same ideas on our new homepage so feel free to critique it as if it were the homepage.

    Product: Desktop SEO/digital marketer tool (similar in some ways to Scrapebox but much more white hat).

    Service: We effectively sell it as a SaaS, so users subscribe to a monthly license fee. Since it is a low price point we want/need the tool to be as ‘self service’ as possible, although we do try to offer a lot of support/education to help users get going.

    Audience: SEOs, Content Strategists, Digital Marketers in general (white/black/grey hat SEOs all use it).

    Thanks!
    Patrick

  3. Adam Browne says:

    Hey Joel, love this idea! I would love to have a critique done on our website http://www.vagusfitness.com. We are a Personal Training studio located in NW Calgary. We specialize in strength & resistance training for beginners. We take a long term approach to your health and wellness with education as an underlying theme in all of our programs.

    The goal of our website is for website visitors to sign-up for our free $100 gift certificate. This is our main lead generation strategy. We also have opt-ins at certain places in our site to sign-up for a 30-day fat loss guide as a softer lead generation strategy (we don’t get their phone number with this opt-in, whereas with the $100 Gift Certificate, we do get their phone number).

    I know that our website needs a lot of work to get it to where we need it to be. A critique by some serious pro’s would be hugely impactful for us!

    Live Fit,

    Adam

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  5. Richard Boon says:

    Bad for me. I’ve missed the webinar.

    Joel, my issue is a bit different though. I’m looking for a feedback for my next blog post. If possible, I’d be happy to send it over. The topic I talk about is product descriptions.

  6. Retargeting says:

    I recommend having your landing page critiqued by experts… It’s very important that your landing page is as optimised as possible. It’s useless to have a high-traffic website if the website isn’t optimised to sell and convert. Great idea, Joel!

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